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A Letter to My Younger Self about Writing and Publishing

Dear Tade,
Congratulations on getting a short story into your college magazine!
Right now, you’re feeling exhilarated, but have no intention of writing for publication. You are engrossed in science and all that comes with it. You study for most of your waking hours. You eat and drink while studying.
Your writing is casual. A story idea strikes you and you sit down, write it from start to finish, then walk away from it forever. You do not rewrite. In your English classes you were taught to have an essay plan, then charge ahead, never modifying after completion.
You write, you draw comics, all for your own consumption, and you are happy. The internet happens. Buy Apple stock, fool. And Pfizer stock-you won’t believe what they are going to invent.
Critique is Work
Join that Yahoo writing group, Quill_n_Ink. It will prove useful, at least in the beginning. The high rate of critique will give you a thick skin and discipline. Later, it will fragment, with the members spinning off into space, and only a few of us remain as writers today. Pro tip: not every writer is objective about critique. People take their writing personally for the most part. Only do this with and for people where there is mutual trust. Critique is also work, and you have to foster a kind of reciprocal arrangement or find some other way of “paying” for it.
Speaking of paying, you’re not going to find that book doctor useful. Save your money.
You will learn what Call for Submissions actually means. When your story gets selected in Carillion, you’ll be happy, but then you get introduced to Contributor’s Copies. Never work for contributors copies or exposure. You don’t need exposure. If your writing is good enough consistently enough, they’ll pay for it sooner or later. Be patient. If they don’t pay, they don’t value it. Try asking the supermarket to give you aubergines “for exposure”, or telling the plumber to do some free work so that you’ll tell your friends. Later for that, man.
Yes, read Strunk and White. Read The Creative Writing Coursebook edited by Bell and Magrs.
Now, you’re writing every day, at least a thousand words, in the morning. You rewrite late at night. Rewriting is this mysterious thing that you do not get, but which you think you’re doing. You’re not.
All About The Benjamins…
You’re going to sell a story, your first paid one. You will not enjoy this experience, but it will be helpful. The editor makes editing suggestions. You trust him to be a professional, and he knows the business, right, otherwise why would he be an editor? Yeah, no. The main lesson you learn from here is always check the edits. It hurts, because the story is nothing like what you wanted, but that’s a mistake you never make again.
The post-grad Creative Writing thing at University of London? Don’t bother with that. It’s two years of imaginary progress. It does not improve your writing. You still do not know how to rewrite.
By now, you know that the key to writing is to read a lot and write a lot, but that’s some simplistic cowdung. You are doing both, but you can tell that your writing is not better. You’ve been reading all your life, and you know how to recognise good prose. You just don’t know how to make it.
You make a sale to a semi-pro zine. Look at that. Someone gave you money for your writing. It feels like a fluke, and, dude, it is. You are so prolific with the words that you were bound to write something readable at some point. The Shakespeare’s Monkey Rule.
You keep reading, you keep writing.
By this time you have three trunked novels. The ideas are fine, but the execution is somewhat amateurish. You have no clue how to fix them. You have sporadic publication in small press, but most of your rejections come back saying essentially, “learn how to revise”, but you don’t.
You decide to stop. I think this is a good thing, and it lasts two years. You write no fiction, you tell yourself you’ve stopped seeking serious publication. Unfortunately, writing is a hard habit to shake and you fill dozens of journals with your thoughts.
Just When I Thought I Was Out…
 
Your friend Raymond tells you about this anthology looking for stories with black protagonists. With like one day to the deadline you send in a story. That was how you get into Mothership from Rosarium Publishing. This is a positive experience. At almost the same time you get a query from the editor of The Apex Book of World SF 2-he wants to reprint one of your stories. This will lead to a number of productive relationships that help to this very day.
You start to write fiction again. This time you know how to read, how to dissect a book and get to know why it’s good or bad. That book you got from a second-hand bin? 13 Ways of Looking at the Novel: What to Read and How to Write by Jane Smiley? Don’t take so long to finally notice and read it. Save some time and read David Madden’s Revising Fiction: A Handbook for Writers.
Finally, you know what revision means, and you are better equipped for serious fiction writing.
The Rosarium guy asks, “What else you got?” and you want to give him that weird, violent, alternative history, West African novel called Making Wolf. Do not. This is a mistake. You’ve been shopping this novel about for years, and while individual editors seem to like it, nobody knows how to market it, so they won’t take a chance. What you should do instead is be satisfied that you’ve written a good book, trunk it, and write the next thing.
But you won’t do that. You’ll give it to Rosarium guy because of your Mothership experience and misplaced loyalty. Rosarium will neither pay you nor provide accounts, using weird verbal acrobatics when you query. But don’t let that sour you on small presses because it teaches you…
The Truth About Small Presses
Don’t despair. You work with others like Solaris and Apex who are great. Small presses are fantastic and take more chances with unclassifiable work like what you write. But you have to do your due diligence, son. Anybody can set up a small press. What you do is find out who they have published and ask them about their experience. What’s the editing experience like? Wherefore art thou, publicity? How promptly to author copies arrive? How flexible are they about cover-design? Where’s the cash coming from? Are the staff both professional and friendly?
Write with your heart, revise with your mind, sell with your brain.
 
You Are The Only Beholder That Counts
 
I have to remind you, buddy, because you already figured this out when you were five and drew Hulk/Sub-Mariner slugfests on pink typing paper. You write because you enjoy it.You don’t need permission to tell your stories. It’s okay for nobody else to like what you write. No, really, it is.
Sometimes you’ll sell your work. Other times, not so much, but that’s okay because you have created a thing that wasn’t in the world before. A beautiful thing, even if you are the only beholder who thinks so. You are the only beholder that counts. Sure, there are parasites in the system who will try and bully you, but you know what? Most publishing folks are okay. It may not seem like it, but I’ve met some really hard-working, passionate people.
So…
 
Remember, be patient, critique is work, never work for free, avoid corrupt presses, you don’t need permission to write, and you are the only one who needs to enjoy what you’ve written.
I’ll be in touch five years from now.
Lots of love,
Tade

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ROSEWATER: A Novel

Publishers Weekly:

[A] compellingly strange yet accessible setting, with an underlying mystery to drive the fast-paced narrative.

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In 24-hours you’ll be able to buy my sci-fi novel ROSEWATER.

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Rosewater-Tade-Thompson-x/dp/1937009297/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1479132397&sr=1-2&keywords=Rosewater

https://www.amazon.com/Rosewater-Tade-Thompson/dp/1937009297

https://www.amazon.fr/Rosewater-Tade-Thompson/dp/1937009297/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&qid=1479132487&sr=8-3&keywords=rosewater

 

 

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The Apologists Splash Page Art

My sci-fi story The Apologists will appear in Interzone #266, September this year.

Below is the graphic by Martin Hanford. I like.

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ROSEWATER cover reveal!

I can finally share this.

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Cover art by Igor Vitkovskiy.

Cover design by Russell Dickerson.

Pre-orders from later this week.

http://www.apexbookcompany.com/blogs/frontpage/rosewater-by-tade-thompson-cover-reveal

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Songs with the Liars

“I only said how I want to be there and I would sing my songs with the liars,and my lies with the singers.”
Anne Sexton

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Here we are at the start of another year. I’m not going to bother with all that revisionist malarkey that everybody does. Why repeat that when others have done it better?

Instead, let’s look at what’s ahead. What are your plans for 2016?

I sold my science fiction novel ROSEWATER to Apex Books. Tentative release date is September 2016. Watch this space, as there may be a promotional website.

Also in September 2016, Secret Project X, a novella. I’ll discuss this with its real title when the embargo is lifted. All I can say is, I’ve finished the novella, including rewrites and editorial input. Stay tuned.

Meanwhile, I’m working on two projects, LABOURS, an urban fantasy novel set in London, and painting an internal illustration for a short story collection.

My 2015 novel MAKING WOLF is still getting good reviews. You’ve bought it, right?

“The British Yoruba author Tade Thompson was previously known to me as a creator of speculative fiction, so I was rather surprised to discover this excellent writer’s intriguingly titled debut novel, Making Wolf, is non-spec mystery/suspense.  Set in the fictional West African nation of Alcacia, this is a novel well aware of the Bond mythos, and there’s a moment where I thought Bond’s path was the one the plot would take.  Then Thompson smashed that notion to smithereens, and kept smashing.  I was not only surprised repeatedly, I was made very aware that my ignorance of what goes on in parts of humanity’s home continent was by choice.  Brutal, unsparing, brilliant.  Find Thompson’s work and read it.”

 

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Available at all good interwebs!

 

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Reviews and Stuff

Mike Tyson said everyone has a plan till they’re punched in the face. Or something similar. Been a while since I had anything to say, mostly because life punched me in the face. No tragedy or drama or anything, just regular life stuff that requires time and effort.

Now then.

Locus Online reviews AfroSFV2 in which my novella ‘The Last Pantheon’ co-written with Nick Wood, gets favourable mention.

“It’s overall an entertaining read with occasional political overtones, not a screed, but at its heart a tragedy of two persons who once called each other brothers.”

Read the full review here.

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My novel MAKING WOLF (which you’ve bought, right?) continues to get favourable reviews.

Here’s one from Val’s Random Comments.

“Thompson has his reasons to tell the story the way he does. He wants the book to be more than a simple fast-paced thriller and succeeds gloriously. It’s a book that hides a lot of food for thought under the surface. I’ve been spoiled with a great many good books this year. Making Wolf is another book I can wholeheartedly recommend.”

Full review here.

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On the short fiction front, African Monsters ToC and Cover art is ready.

My story “120 Days of Sunlight” is in it.

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You can read my horror short story “The Monkey House” on Omenana for free. Lots of other fiction there too.

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That’s it for now. Tip your nurses and janitors!

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Review: A Killing in the Sun by Dilman Dila

Short version: 4/5 stars. I recommend that you read it.

 A Killing in the Sun is a speculative fiction collection by Dilman Dila, published by Black Letter Media. The titular story was shortlisted for the 2013 Commonwealth Short Story Prize.

This anthology includes ten short stories and I read them in sequence. I found the copyrights page confusing because it refers to a story that is not actually in the collection (Fragments of Canvas). As in most collections the quality is uneven. To my mind the first six stories were enjoyable, but I struggled through the last four.

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The best story appears to be A Killing in the Sun. It is the most consistent and the most polished. It opens on the day of an execution by firing squad. The condemned man, Mande, appears to have been convicted for something he did not do, but finds his salvation to be almost as bitter as his previous fate. It also touches on one of the themes that run through the whole collection: being taken by authorities and somehow harmed. The other theme that runs through is that of the protagonist somehow changing state. The Leafy Man is an imaginative science fiction tale about artificially mutated mosquitoes nicknamed Miss Doe and is Promethean, with unintended consequences of innovation. The Healer is a fantasy story with magic and themes of loss. Itanda Bridge is a science fiction piece about extraterrestrials and while Diba does not show as much control of the material as he did in other stories it is creepy and enjoyable.

With The Doctor’s Truck flaws begin to show. This story is reminiscent of Christine by King in some parts. The explanation is satisfactory enough, however I found the motivation of the doctor difficult to accept in some parts. The ending appears too pat, slightly rushed and perhaps is a revenge fantasy. Lights over Water has an interesting premise, but as in most of the rest of the stories appears to need more work. A Wife and a Slave for example, builds up well, but the ending is again too neat. Things go too well for the protagonist and there is easy wish fulfilment.

The Yellow People had genuinely macabre moments and is a first class sci-fi horror story. It uses the image of the moving of a stone slab away from a cave, which has Biblical resonance for resurrection. The removal of thumbs makes one think of dehumanization since opposable thumbs are essentially what makes us human. The problem here is that the protagonists appear to be moving like chess pieces. It’s a story of alien contact and a serial killer. This story has great potential, but all the explanation seems rushed towards the end, which is disappointing.

Reading this anthology was frustrating, and not because Dila can’t write elegant prose. He can. Generally, I found the book poorly edited. The mistakes were annoying tense problems, syntax problems, unintentional repetitions etc. All avoidable if more care was taken. Apart from the copy editing issues, many of the later stories could benefit from continuity and story editing. Dila has good material and can clearly write brilliant speculative fiction. I just do not understand what the editors at Black Letter Media were thinking.

That said, I did enjoy reading the book. As speculative fiction and as a snapshot of life in sub-Saharan Africa it succeeds. I expect great things from Mr Dila.

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